The leader (an Arabian sonnet)- A Poem by Brigitte Poirson
We never found a way
under his sway.
The elephant trampled us
in the fray.
At Lion’s carnal feast
we did fall a prey.
The sun blinds us, but
we still feel no ray.
For his sake, burning,
we flared in his lie.
And his forceful flood
left us high and dry.
His shady plot though
stared us in our aye.
His sky made us vie to
die, not to fly.
He was only bound by our
own promise
To follow him and grow
in common bliss!
His sweet song was but
insane serpent’s bliss!
Over our heads past and
future gather.
In the desert we share
manna, yonder,
Where angels and beasts
will live together.
The Arabian
sonnet is composed of two quatrains and two tercets. The rhyming pattern is:
a,a,a,a
b,b,b,b
c,c,c
d,d,d
They are
metered at 10 syllables per line.
The lines
are composed of iambic pentameters ( this is one thing I haven’t strictly
followed the rhythm, like many others, as it tends to bridle inspiration
a bit too much! )
The volta,
i.e. a turn, a climax in the sonnet, is on line 9
(in the Divided Lines anthology)
May those who think power is about forcefully compelling others to be submissive realise power lies in serving them
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